Friday, 8 November 2013


I come from poem

I come from the hill,

A home with just the three of us.

Living life like every day is the last,

Reaching life to it’s full potential.

Why sit at home, and let the world go by,

Get out there and do something just like we do.

Life and money is for living and spending,

So why save live your live whilst you can.


Reflective Commentary

My idea behind this is to show how life is for living, and how me and my family aren’t people to sit around and do nothing. Why should you sit there and be boring, we only get one life so get out there and live it. Therefore I wanted to put my ideas about this across in the poem, family is important to treasure and do things with so why not.

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